GRE Essay Feedback Hour July 14

<p><span style="font-size:18px"><strong>Issue Prompt:</strong></span></p> <p><span style="font-size:18px">Some people argue that successful leaders in government, industry, or other fields must be highly competitive. Other people claim that in order to be successful, a leader must be willing and able to cooperate with others.</span></p> <p><em><span style="font-size:18px">Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.</span></em></p> <p>&nbsp;</p> <p><span style="font-size:18px"><strong>Argument Prompt:</strong></span></p> <p><span style="font-size:18px">The following appeared in a letter to the editor of a local newspaper.<br /> Commuters complain that increased rush-hour traffic on Blue Highway between the suburbs and the city center has doubled their commuting time. The favored proposal of the motorists&#39; lobby is to widen the highway, adding an additional lane of traffic. But last year&#39;s addition of a lane to the nearby Green Highway was followed by a worsening of traffic jams on it. A better alternative is to add a bicycle lane to Blue Highway. Many area residents are keen bicyclists. A bicycle lane would encourage them to use bicycles to commute, and so would reduce rush-hour traffic rather than fostering an increase.</span></p> <p><span style="font-size:18px"><em>Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.</em></span></p>